MarishaIsMeMar 06, 2014

Thank you

bmg128Aug 07, 2013

Oh boy. You're an English student? You've got a lot to learn. You've gotten such a low rating from MANY grammar/spelling mistakes, from other jealous higher, more popular, writers. The house is odd, and so is your choice of clothing. Most people on here are older than teenagers, and would not like to read about them. And, I'm pretty sure, no teenager would just walk over being told some guy likes her, rumor or not. However, this is not much better material than some of the stories on here, who get 5.0 ratings. Don't fall down from this. Maybe try looking at some other stories on this site, and learning from them. I'm not saying all of this because I wanna be mean. Why would I do that? I feel pity for you. 1.0? Dang. I'm sorry if this hurt you. DON'T GIVE UP, OKAY? Keep trying. Fall. Keep trying. Fall. What do you do? Say it out loud, now. "Keep trying". You'll get there. I promise. \:\)